03.09.2006
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Nyunt Shwe said _
A good poem, perhaps, excellent! It is a hard time to find a good one (I mean
poetically) on web pages nowadays. Most of the poems were garbage. I have
criticized two poetry inscribers and given them advice how they could improve
their skills by learning from basics, one become a good poem writer (I have yet
to wait to call him a poet though his progress.), but the other cut the link out
and stopped sending his poems to me. But, later, I found a few of his poems from
other sources and found no progress at all. Most of the 8888 movement poem
writers do not respect the rules of how to write a poem due to misunderstanding
of the free-verse style composition. They do not know about rhyme or rhythm
either. Aung Ko Thet is different; he has said how he felt after seeing the
movie precisely in poetic form, his rhythm left resounding in your heart.
However, if I were his editor, I would suggest to replace 'lay' with 'ngae' in
his second paragraph's second line (Nae myo lay myogyi twei le padae) to better
rhyme to its precedent line without changing the meaning of the original.
Ko Ko said _
Cool! Ko Thet, frankly say, I didn't expect you that much but it turned out really fantastic. Just keep on working man.
Bawgawady said _
Oh. really...pretty good my friend.
Nyunt Shwe said _
Dear Selection body, I am very proud of both of you and the poet. Keep on feeding us with good Arts. Thank you.
A Burmese said _
I love it!
Yin Min Paik said _
That is very good.
Min Khine said _
I don't fully understand what you mean. It gives me a headache but I give you a lot of credits.
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